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Forgotten Earth
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 07:09:09 PM in AEST
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oops
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I see the moment has ended
That the curtain is lowered
I see the mountain snow has fallen
That the sea bed has withered then risen
I sense the delicate poison
That is fed and injected unnoticed
Where people turn their heads
I see abandonment
With the debris piling
I witness a dissolving planet
Rotating out of its environment
I see the page
I can decipher the message
The meaning to this madness
The reasoning is endless
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2005-06-18 19:09:09]
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Re: Forgotten Earth
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by Masked_Man on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 07:56:54 PM AEST
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it is hell on earth..
great write
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Re: Forgotten Earth
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 02:42:48 AM AEST
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I really like this one a lot jyss...It's hopeless and full of despair, yet there's a teeny, tiny glimmer of hope...Hold on to that...; )
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