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My Wall That towers High
Contributed by
Masked_Man
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:24:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Another day, another time
lost amist to never find
lonely here and lonely there
lonely feelings not to spare
chances had and chances passed
I sit and wallow to the last
behind my wall that towers high
seems I've built it to the sky
beneath my ever watchful eye
Shunning all who come to near
controlling universal fear
is bringing me unto the end
my single solitary friend
who's been watchful just as long as I
beneath my ever watchful eye
behind my wall that towers high
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Masked_Man
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2005-06-18 21:24:34]
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Re: My Wall That towers High
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:33:09 PM AEST
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awesome poem!! i loved it. it is sad and i do hope that you've remebered to build a door or window for those who care. i did! but i locked all mine behind my wall that towers high! lol. i do hope that, unlike me, you do all others in and others to care about you. there are people out there that do care! i hope it all turns out ok!!! keep up the good work!!!
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Re: My Wall That towers High
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:52:42 PM AEST
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I understand this well, I think, am going so far as to say. It's a very good way of putting things, and I think the human heart does this often, as a way of trying to escape the storms and wounds of the world. But it's none too good a refuge, as I take it you understand.
I'd be interested to hear your views on pride and dignity. Personally, I think it is that which makes us enter walls such as these. Myself, I've condemned my wall long ago, and am resolutely (if slowly) dismantling it, stone by stone.
A truly thought-provoking piece. Well done.
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Re: My Wall That towers High
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by unluckicharmz on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:59:39 PM AEST
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| i totally understand this poem and i like it alot |
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Re: My Wall That towers High
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:25:14 PM AEST
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Oh,I know emotional walls. Some are straw and some are wood and some many a hurricane have withstood. That was the kind I built. Problem is, I can't seem to tear it down now. Fear and anxiety do strange things to our lives. I hope you find bad concrete in yours.
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Re: My Wall That towers High
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by wizard on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 12:28:00 AM AEST
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very good write. nice flow.
it seems that sometimes we get so busy trying to keep others out, we don't realize that we are actually keeping ourselves in.
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