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borrowed time
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:59:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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as i look down the road ahead
and behind what ive been through
i stop to smell a single rose
their beauty are so few
i struggle to take just one more step
but it seems i cant go on
the energy within my soul
that brought me here is gone
it seems so long a journey
just to smell another rose
there should be more along the way
why not
god only knows
so now i use the last of life
to live a way that's mine
and hope to smell just one more rose
i live on borrowed time
b
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Re: borrowed time
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 02:33:39 AM AEST
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Oh this is so horribly sad!!! I love the way you worded it, and the flow, and emotion...but it's so damn sad....Cheer up my friend...Happiness is around every corner...; )
Scorp. |
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Re: borrowed time
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by Shnyzz on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 04:01:35 AM AEST
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| I love the fluidness of this poem and the way you convey you emotions. Magnifico!! |
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Re: borrowed time
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:02:21 AM AEST
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wow...this was really good....its does seem like a long journey just to smell another perfect rose....but when and if you get there...it will be an amazing thing....
nice write |
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Re: borrowed time
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 12:40:39 PM AEST
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It is hard sometimes Billy to find the stamina to go on. I know. It just doesn't seem worth it. But it is. We just have to keep going no matter what. I wish you luck my friend.
smiles,
Rita |
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Re: borrowed time
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 03:03:02 PM AEST
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This poem is awsome, im glad u wrote it if i
did every one would have said " Ben don't be
so hard on your self " so nice 2 know some
one else knows it's just a matter of time, love
your writting i use to write like that once, till
i got . . .
********** 4u
Ben |
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Re: borrowed time
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:33:40 PM AEST
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Very emotive.
God, i can so much relate....i think my journey is too long also.
Keep up the great writing, I always enjoy it.
Hope to you dear poet. |
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Re: borrowed time
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 08:20:43 PM AEST
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Hmm somehow this is is how I feel lately...
Good write...
Jenni |
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Re: borrowed time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 06:24:28 PM AEST
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your struggle is felt, dearest ..
as is your hope and desire -
and if you find time running out, you can
borrow some of mine ..
:)
always yours, with love
~Breezy
(hoping sleep finds you) |
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