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Angel of Death
Contributed by
living_dead_girl
on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:34:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm staring staright at the angel of death
As I draw my very last breath
It all unwraps, all the lies
As I look into her eyes
She doesn't smile, her face is stone
We're in the darkness all alone
You grab my arms, I start to scream
My eyes open, it was all a dream
I was scared, I almost died
But you would't let me go to the other side
You hold my hand & my bandaged wrist
Because of you I still exsist
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living_dead_girl
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2005-06-19 13:34:40]
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Re: Angel of Death
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:59:06 PM AEST
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| I like the words you used in this poem, good write. |
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Re: Angel of Death
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:27:45 PM AEST
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This a short poem that shows good emotion. It was a good write, keep it up.
Bye,
☺Mando☺ |
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Re: Angel of Death
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by RavenEnsued on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:56:11 PM AEST
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| I like this poem because it shows that if there is someone that loves you then you really do have a reason to live. Really great writing! |
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