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The Nightmare
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:36:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Ocean dark, as black as night
Seagull's shiver, hide with fright
Mists are swirling, round and round
Swoosh then swish, the only sound
Air is putrid, wet and dank
Out of mists there creeps a plank
Followed by a bow, a mast
Ghostly shadow from the past
Hear the creaking of the wood
Feel the terror in my blood
Yo! Ho! Ho! the pirates cry
Who is waiting there to die?
Skull and Cross bones flying high
In that evil, blackened sky
Where's the treasure?, voices boom
You had better find it soon
Close my eyes, I dare not see
What is right in front of me
Open them and take a peek
Waiting for my skin to creep
What is that? a ray of sun
telling me day has begun
Oh! thank goodness what a fright
Just a terror of the night
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gwenevere
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2005-06-19 13:36:42]
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Re: The Nightmare
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by Mild_Tempest on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:52:43 PM AEST
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| That's so good. I love the rhymes!! They matched so perfectly. Keep writing. |
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Re: The Nightmare
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 02:35:32 PM AEST
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I am now convinced of the fact that you have been reincarnated to this life from a time in the middle ages..there can be no mistake of this ..lol
as you write so fluidly and convincingly of the time..
I love your work!
a magnificent write indeed-
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Re: The Nightmare
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 02:53:33 PM AEST
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This poem actually made me feel good i love the sea and pirates and going back into the past as a boy in new england beautiful writting u do, well crafted and yet doesn't loose it's emotional validity . . .
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