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marionette
Contributed by
kels497
on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Forced to live
This pointless charade
Superficial happiness
Undercurrents of anger
Powerless to change my life
My enemy holds
The key to my chains
Unable to move on my own
Breathe for myself
You crushed my dreams
Broke my spirit
Now i'm your lifeless puppet
You hold my strings
And it's going to smother my soul
So sit back and relax
I do it all for you
So i hope you like the show
Copyright ©
kels497
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2003-01-06 10:20:00]
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Re: marionette
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 10:24:27 AM AEST
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| Good poem, strong emotions. I'm sure it is a difficult thingto have your enemy living within your own home. |
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Re: marionette
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by thorns on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 12:31:40 PM AEST
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| that's how I feel sometimes. i get so sick of acting. |
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Re: marionette
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 01:46:37 PM AEST
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| hang in there always stay true to yourself and believe in yourself..eventually you will be able to shine thru. |
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Re: marionette
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 03:36:51 PM AEST
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| ooh...this is so true, and so beautifully written...i love this poem... |
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Re: marionette
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by Niceguysfinishlast on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 12:15:52 AM AEST
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hey kelsey its me Elusive04 or Jon, the puppet master is your parents isnt it?
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