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Empty Spaces
Contributed by
curtisc
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 07:06:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Here I am all alone,
holding on to something so dear to me.
I lost the best thing I've ever known,
now I'll never know what we could be.
In my heart I feel this empty space,
and it's only meant for one.
She is one thing I can't replace,
without her my life has no sun.
I feel as though I have lost my soul,
I live but I'm not alive.
My life is spinning way out of control,
how will I ever survive?
The best thing that ever happened to me is tearing me apart,
this isn't how things are supposed to be.
Why do I still carry all this love in my heart,
if there's really no chance that she'll come back to me.
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2005-06-19 19:06:33]
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 07:13:22 PM AEST
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| really heartfelt and emotional. you did a good job describing =). good job. keep on writing. |
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:00:21 PM AEST
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this was a great write! and i'm sorry you had to lose her. i know a lot of people have empty spaces. and mine is eating me alive. and i know what it's like to be alive but not. i just want you to know you're not alone. this was a goodd poem, otherwise!! keep up the good work!!! and i wish you the best of luck and hope everything turns out okay for you!!!
~sprints |
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:00:10 PM AEST
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Ahh the bitter heartbreak of loving the one you cant have.
I can relate very much to your thoughts of loss, i felt as If i wrote this lol, thats how real it felt to me. Your words did touch my heart and i can sense the pain that I still carry today.
Talk to me anytime ok. Well done, heart wrenching poem.
Hope to you. |
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 01:21:56 PM AEST
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A beautiful though sad expression of love nice write as always . . .
Ben |
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by O7NeVeS on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:39:43 AM AEST
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Extremely sad write, as have been the last handful of ur poems. However, it's not the end of the world although i know it can feel like it is, but keep this in mind. A friend of mine once wrote:
"for sometime you were my everything, but i never would have thought, that i was gonna soon be taught, pain is all that's brought. But I tell you this, you can be sure that your problems will evolve and worsten, once you realize that your life revolves around one person..."
Just something to think about. Great write. TD |
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