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When All Is Dying
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:36:25 PM in AEST
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When everything is dying
Your heart
Your will
When all in you is crying
Will you fight?
Will you take courage?
For once you used
To mark yourself
Taking a blade
Upon your wrist
Well now to be brave
To appreciate
Is something you cant resist
When your time comes
The time for you to die
Will you be noble?
Or will you bow your head
Awaiting death?
Blood must be drawn
From your shallow veins
Nows your chance
To cherish life
And all that it contains
When your time comes
Will you be grateful
And your soul finally give?
Will you choose to lay and rot?
Or will you bleed to live?
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pUnKa_RaCh
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Re: When All Is Dying
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:55:50 PM AEST
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"When your time comes
Will you be grateful
And your soul finally give?
Will you choose to lay and rot?
Or will you bleed to live?"
love this stanza-
the last two lines especially..
deep and powerful words.. these.
B
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Re: When All Is Dying
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by emokid on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:04:06 PM AEST
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great write reminds me of........... well me =p keep it up good luck
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Re: When All Is Dying
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:06:10 PM AEST
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thats a great poem
and so very powerful in its
simple words
i loved it
-->Rae |
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Re: When All Is Dying
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by Maxximus on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:53:29 AM AEST
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| Very nice, you illustrated the patterns of life and death here very well. You've got the right idea, everything requires sacrifice- anything worth a penny of your time such as life itself. Again, great stuff and keep it up |
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