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Touch
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:33:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Beyond space and time
beyond this reality
and the next
beyond this place
there is a touch
the touch of your breath
on my soul
of every sweet word
upon this screen
or whispered against my skin
the touch of your eyes
caressing all they survey
the touch of your hands
your lips
of your soul reaching out
to find mine in a lifetime past
straining for contact
as it once was
in this moment there is only this
there is only you.
B
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Man_On_High
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Re: Touch
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:49:26 AM AEST
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Very nice Billy! Well done...What a very pretty poem to your special lady.
Scorp. |
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Re: Touch
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:44:08 AM AEST
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| Lovely and sweet write, simple yet effective. Lucky lady of yours :) |
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Re: Touch
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:41:30 AM AEST
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| this was a great write...i loved that it didnt need to ryhme to have good flow...didnt need big words to make an impact.....great job |
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Re: Touch
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 02:02:49 PM AEST
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A lovely peice of writting about love well done
bill, via the heart . . .
Ben |
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Re: Touch
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 02:46:13 PM AEST
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awww so sweet and beautiful.
awsome write. |
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Re: Touch
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by gwenevere on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 04:30:52 PM AEST
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| Beautiful a love just a memory away, Ros |
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Re: Touch
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:06:45 PM AEST
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I agree that she is very lucky and very special to receive words from you heart like this. I do hope you say them to her for it is love words like this that can hold a couple together forever.
Rita |
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Re: Touch
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by Justintears on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:26:03 PM AEST
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| Words of enchanting beauty. Well done.... |
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Re: Touch
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by brew on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:14:16 PM AEST
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A sentiment for a special one. Well done. Hope all is appericated. more should be the same. Well done.
Brew~ |
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Re: Touch
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 07:14:26 AM AEST
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ahhh beautiful words....
very captivating and honest.
you captured my heart lol
well done |
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Re: Touch
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by nanb294eva on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:24:51 PM AEST
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dear billy
i love that one
it's these kind of poems that keep me reading and put a smile on my face day to day
ps: morning dove yes he does it was what attracted me to him in the first place and what makes me smile and cry at the same time here and there
great write billy
love nancy
i wish i could write like that to you your poems are an inspiration to all
THEY SHOULD BE ON HALLMARK CARDS |
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Re: Touch
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:14:21 PM AEST
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*sigh*
....dripping with devotion & passion. What an incredible write,
Billy. How delicate and sweet. We should all hope to find
this one day and to be able to hold unto that forever on into
the eternal, timeless future....
touched again by your gentle beauty mon ami
~Breezy |
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