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final story
Contributed by
lil_angel_eyes
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Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
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I had a dream last night
A dream that caused me a fright
the dream was that i would die
and to this world i would say goodbye
it wasnt dying that made me scared
feelings of dying is something ive shared
it was the thought that scared me most
was the fact im looking forward to becoming a ghost
leaving my horrible hated life
leaving this trouble and strife
going to heaven a place of love
spending time with my mum above
please come and take me away
take me from my hateful day
i just want to lay down and rest
i know that this is for the best
for all of you who say
that you love me and dont go this way
i dont want to hear another word
i just wanna be left un heard
so here is how the story ends
goodbye to my family and friends
cause this is the last you will hear me talk
before heavens path i walk
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2003-01-06 14:20:00]
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Re: final story
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by SuicidalSon on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 12:51:59 PM AEST
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I like it, but you want to be heard,all with thoughts like that need to be heard.
After all we are a dying breed. |
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