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Sail back forwards
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 04:40:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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On the farside
far from home I slide,
those were days of words
that never were heard,
in the dark world where
you don't care,
on the farside
you be up and I'll be down
life did spin around and around,
those were days of words and fear
capture time in minutes flash
in the darkness,
where giants ruled
paper airplanes,
but there came a giant I couldn't fight,
he was just too strong
he was right and I was wrong,
on the farside you be love and I'll be dought
when my ship came in I was at the airport,
dragons breathing fire
I was many things.
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ladyfawn
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Re: Sail back forwards
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 09:03:11 PM AEST
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| well written,,,imagination,altogether,,and sad,,spooky keepm comin |
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Re: Sail back forwards
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 09:03:26 PM AEST
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| well written,,,imagination,altogether,,and sad,,spooky keepm comin |
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Re: Sail back forwards
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by nomad on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 03:12:16 PM AEST
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| Fantastic write, Nessa. Vivid and captivating images. Thought-provoking. I love your analogies too. You are many things, truly wonderful. |
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Re: Sail back forwards
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 01:40:39 AM AEST
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Really Good
It can be so many places in a persons life
It reminds me of some of my dark days
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Re: Sail back forwards
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:28:50 PM AEST
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One word-----IMAGINATION.
I believe these thoughts were incredibly unique.
I was going to quote a stanza and then found that stanza one and two I would have had to quote both!
Just the title "Sail back forwards" is so catchy that it has taken over my mind.
Kie
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Re: Sail back forwards
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 10:14:44 PM AEST
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| Enjoying peeking back at some of your earlier stuff. Like going through a toybox of great toys.Great work Nessa. |
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Re: Sail back forwards
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by hray42 on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 06:03:16 PM AEST
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| Wow.. Once again you have come to surprise me with similarity.. I will stop mentioning that.. But, in my next poem you will notice it too.. Although I think you already have.. Anyway, I liked this one a lot.. I never critique, that is not my place.. But to commend, that is for art and artists.. I commend you... |
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