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If I Die Before I Wake
Contributed by
HoPeFuLtKn
on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My magic seems to have run out,
Leaving me with so much doubt.
The spells I cast on you are done,
Which means, for me, there's no more fun.
That cauldron of my heart is gone,
Seeming sad until next dawn.
Evil demons I once vanquished,
To them, life is all they wished.
Old times are over now,
The magic, no longer, will they allow.
My only powers were abruptly taken from me,
I'll learn to cope with life normally.
I'll make the sun burn brighter,
I won't set down because I'm a fighter.
Earth spins on it's axis because of me,
I made all the animals roam free.
I'm that girl who's strong and bold,
I rarely do the things I'm told.
I'm that girl who's meek and mild,
Some people say I'm just too wild.
When the sun sets and reality checks in,
I do my deed they call a sin.
That razor blade is my best friend,
It seems to make all my problems mend.
That crimson flow leeks down my wrist,
Leaving me again seeing a mist.
I lay down and to God I pray,
To help me see another day.
If I die before I wake,
My soul, the demons of hell will take.
For my magic is no longer awake,
The decisions, for me, are my choices to make.
You leave me lying on the floor,
Walking slowly out of that door.
Heartless, you turned your back against me,
Now it's time for my soul to take flee.
They castrate my body as one piece,
I lent it to them, I'm only on lease.
Till I can say goodbye to my magic,
Remember my problems and all of it's tragic.
Copyright ©
HoPeFuLtKn
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2005-06-20 17:13:14]
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Re: If I Die Before I Wake
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by visualizing_life on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 09:52:00 PM AEST
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| i loved this poem!! i completely understand where you are coming from when you wrote this....i hope your not a cutter or depressed but i am...and it does take over your life until death...most people dont understand why cut if you want to live? even if your magic hasn't run out and its not all tragic you'll never understand the train of thought of a cutter...dont try...keep writing...vl |
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Re: If I Die Before I Wake
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:15:57 AM AEST
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| That was a very vivid poem. It was very good, but I must say that you are very young and whatever it is that has you so upset to think about suicide or to cut yourself will pass. Things WILL get better. You are only what 14 or 15? I felt like you at your age, thought things were gong to be the end of my world. There is much more to life. Don't cheat yourself out of the goodness life can bring because of teenage issues that will work out. Think about other people, it's selfish. You are a good writer. Use your words and imagination to express your emotions not a knife or a blade. Good luck to you! |
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