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The Final Layer
Contributed by
harshreality
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Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:31:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I try so hard;
But inevitably, I fall short-
In my mind nothing makes sense.
This world is just a cold lonely place....
And now I'm worse off than before.
Lost inside my thoughts,
I cannot make them go away;
The what ifs and should'ves,
Are unrelenting-
my head is hurting...
I can't take this anymore.
So the final layer is added-
To the wall within myself ;
I stand behind it, finally safe-
Although badly scarred;
theres no new pain to endure.
No one else will ever reach,
Deep enough to matter ;
I will not allow myself to feel this way again-
My heart is locked away,
Forever protected against the impure!
Copyright ©
harshreality
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2005-06-20 20:31:26]
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Re: The Final Layer
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by Esther on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 09:24:51 PM AEST
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Thats a really good poem. But I don't know if that's really the way to stop yourself from getting hurt. That's a step up for lonliness.
Good Luck for the future. Hope it brings you happiness. |
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Re: The Final Layer
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:44:19 PM AEST
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heal you must..
but I implore you not to lock yourself away..
something serendipitous could be waiting right
around the corner..
your writes are so very sad indeed..
well thought and written..
but sad.
(kissin' you on the cheek)
many hugs friend-
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