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Not Quite Right With Myself
Contributed by
xXx_lil_pyro_xXx
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Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:40:11 PM in AEST
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My skin doesn't fit on my body right,
There's not enough room for this many problems in my head,
My eyes have a difficulty adjusting to light,
My voice makes me sound like i'm half-way dead.
My skin tone just looks really pale,
My hair will NOT stopp frizzing,
I'm put to shame by all of the models i worship
Even after all the preping, and prissing.
My ears are SO off-center,
Oh my god! I'm so over-weight,
I need to get back to the weight of a splinter,
Because it is me, whome i've grown to hate
I wish my memory would work right already,
I can't remember a thing my parents say,
The way that I walk is extremely unsteady,
When I stand in one place long enough, I sway.
But that's how it is for us teens now-a-days,
The ones rejected to the back of the shelf,
The "Freaks", the "Goths", the "Nerds", and the "Gays",
The teens with things "not quite right" with themselves.
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Re: Not Quite Right With Myself
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:48:01 PM AEST
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an open book of emotions, expressing a period of self doubt and worthlessness,
it'll end one day and a new reality will set
in, called life, a very courageious write . . .
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Re: Not Quite Right With Myself
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:38:27 AM AEST
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WoW! Karis this is amazing and very creative! .. I wonder if I'm in here? .. this was wonderful and I love the ending, I also agree with Ben it's like a book and a big collection you speak for so many out there, well done!
Your cuz,
.amanda. |
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Re: Not Quite Right With Myself
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by fireispassion on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:55:16 AM AEST
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| i like it i think that many ppl will be able to relate! exspecailly girls!! great job! |
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