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GPS
Contributed by
fairytalecamper
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Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 03:51:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Can I be optimistic? These lyrics you wrote, All of them are factual. He's lurkign in the shadows Of all my summer photography He's dancing behind the general manager While the general manager tells us "Do not play with fire"; Although it's understood Being a pyromaniac is all part of the experience. Those friendly hugs That are a little too long To be classified as platonic. Watching the wild blue yonder, Fade to darkness, It's the glistening starts, That remind us nothing is ever forgotten, We're all still together, If not in body then in mind. So as we sit there frozen, Focusing on the flickering flames in front of us Everything falls together All the scattered fragments of you and me. This is me being optimistic Believing all those words were true It's my turn now, For true love and nothign after. I can bottle up the time I'd spend placing x's over o's And use the sharpie ink for something better Like remembering togetherness. Holding hands with you As we walk down memory lane Humming Disney musicals. Ignoring the reality Nothing lasts forever.
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Re: GPS
(User Rating: 1 ) by europeanprincess on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 09:33:43 PM AEST (User
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I totally liked the poem. This was a great word play. I hope to read more of your poems. Thank you for sharing this. |
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