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Contributed by
justme03
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Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 04:15:12 PM in AEST
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A Gemini twin searching for her other half.
Half a person no way to survive.
Trying to become one and complete a struggle within.
Winter, Summer, Spring, to Fall
A circle complete, I can never be all.
I wish my other self didnt die
I wish that this was just a lie.
Why is it just me alone?
This does not seem the way it should be.
No matter how big, there is always a larger fish
in the sea
A food chain, a circle they are complete.
Im never gonna be complete.
The big picture of the circle of life.
I feel left out of the loop,
standing on the sidelines in the cosmic atmosphere.
The galaxy. The orbits made continually.
I will never go around. I stay grounded,
broken and incomplete.
I cant find the rest of me
Im only half of what I should be.
So here I am, a Gemini twin, searching
for her other half.
~Kortnie~
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2005-06-21 16:15:12]
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Re: Complete
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by JustAGirl001 on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:22:54 PM AEST
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh. :O Omg,I didn't get this untill the end when it said"Gemini twin,searchin for her other half" ROFL. Great poem though. Point well stated.
Lylas
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Re: Complete
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 11:59:24 AM AEST
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| This an amazing poem..... I can see & feel your longing for completion......Amazing poem!! |
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