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Death
Contributed by
Snugglebear
on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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We live in this world
our own secret hell
where we all lie
no truth is there left to tell
this pitiful existence
that we call life
Is just an excuse
for us to endure its strife
we've lived through
the darkness and hate
we've survived against all odds
but i don't wat to try its just too late
now we must die
and travel towards the light
remeber death's bark
is much worse than its bite
Copyright ©
Snugglebear
... [
2003-01-06 19:20:00]
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Re: Death
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 10:17:17 PM AEST
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Dear Snugglebear @-<-<<
An Excellent Write my friend,
always Nessa |
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Re: Death
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 10:06:08 AM AEST
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| Yes I know what you mean by this! Much of a thought! Good peice! Christina |
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Re: Death
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by frozensuicide on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:02:35 PM AEST
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| i like this. its very good. you should make it longer though! cvause its so good!!! hehethanks for posting it! |
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Re: Death
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by frozensuicide on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:08:36 PM AEST
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| i dig this one. it is good! thanks for sharin this one. its super!!! |
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Re: Death
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 11:12:02 PM AEST
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| splended!!!!!!!! just like a fresh walk on the beach. |
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