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Creator of a Love's Decay
Contributed by
puppy_dog_Eyes
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Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:26:00 PM in AEST
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Yet again you play me like an old familiar violin
Can I bear the pizzicato of your deception ?
Draw your bow across the scars of my aching heart
I am the instrument of your callous will
Helium filled were your lies, lifted me to the heavens
Each little piece of the jigsaw pulling me back to earth
Rocky ground on which I fall, bursts my bubble, my perfect world
The sea in which I'm swimming, now realised as a stagnant pool
The dust of your cunning blew straight in my eyes
Blinded by devoted words, as empty as a morning teacup
Catching my breath for the first time, the truth chokes
Too long suffocated, poisoned by the unrelenting fragrance of ignorant bliss
Finally time to spit you out, your bitter cherry stone
The fruit that once appeared so sweet, so sickening and sour
Unmasked I see the flesh so rotten to the core
In your eyes I look, at last behold, the creator of a love's decay
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Re: Creator of a Love's Decay
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:43:27 PM AEST
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| wow. talk about a masterpiece!! it was beautiful,sad,decieving. Im loving the imagery. you did an amazing job.loved every line. |
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Re: Creator of a Love's Decay
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:53:58 PM AEST
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Ohhhh wow....heavy stuff....
Still happens too often tho....people holding up a fake image...sad really.....
Very good writing Steve....loved it......
huggssss n loveeeee
Nats. |
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Re: Creator of a Love's Decay
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by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 11:23:31 AM AEST
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honest emotion. great write
sad how images of poeple we once loved turn to... "sickening and sour".
i know a man who is indeed rotten to the core.
nat
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Re: Creator of a Love's Decay
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 11:53:09 AM AEST
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| Wow! That was great. I loved the words you used. I too have seen a friend get hurt. It sucks because you want so much to take the pain away, but you can't. Great write. |
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Re: Creator of a Love's Decay
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by rosethorn100 on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 05:30:02 AM AEST
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beautiful poem as always - steve
loved every line of it - very deep,
i've too have know someone whom
i found out was fake too - very sad indeed
to think you know someone well and then
you find out they are not what you thought
as if they've taken a mask of there face
good work as always
huggggggggggs
rosey xxx
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