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Excuses and a bad exhaust pipe
Contributed by
LevyMetal
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Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:08:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If you're waiting, then what are you waiting for?
Jus' recipicating while inhaling fumes on the bathroom floor
Tried so hard to not stoop so slow but now im doomed for life
Call out the search groups, cry out- i need any advice!
Gambling savings while playing with matches
Up the bet im giving up all and any chances
Sick of the cycle and here goes my best shot
One left in my pocket, please whiskey on the rocks
If im waiting, tell me why has it been so long?
Jus' anticipating to find out where everything went all wrong
Did my best to become who you wanted me to be in this life
Falling out with the engines, broken fuses-i need a ride...
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Re: Excuses and a bad exhaust pipe
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:23:48 PM AEST
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| i think its a rouch and raw poem. very well written. your feelings pop up from the pae. it was a great write. |
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Re: Excuses and a bad exhaust pipe
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:32:31 PM AEST
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| that was good, i enjoyed it, thank you |
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