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Magical Journey
Contributed by
Brandyx7
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Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:28:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Could I run away on my magic carpet? To a Neverland of pixie dust And one eyed pirates
May I run? To a wizard Of a land called OZ And see a horse of a different color
Can I run away with a white Rabbit? To a place of wonder So I may meet a girl named Alice Only to have tea with a Madhatter
Will I run? And clean chimneys with Mary Poppins And be practically perfect in every way Living off a spoonful of sugar
Can I run away? On a pumpkin carriage To a fairytale ball And lose my slipper of glass Only to be rescued by a charmed prince
Could I run far far away? To mulberry lane And meet the muffin man With the help of a ginger bread
Could I run away? To all these places Only to be Gone with the Wind In just a click of the rubies Before anyone can say Supercalifraglisticexpialidocious!
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Re: Magical Journey
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:48:57 PM AEST (User
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Very good work.
Awesome.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Magical Journey
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 04:31:32 AM AEST (User
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Brandyx You can be and do all of these things. I should know I do them every day. I loved this poem of yours and give it top marks for first the questioning and second for the imagination. Well done from bernard. 75 year old poet and still full of Fairy tales. Keep your imagination it will prove to be the best thing in your life. Keep smiling from bernard. |
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