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i hope ur happy
Contributed by
razorbladesangel45
on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:25:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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To The Guy i Will Always Love
tears stream down my face
as i slide down the wall
the blood flowing from my wrists
the horrible thoughts and memories in my head
as i slowly stand up and walk to the sink
i look into the mirror
at my tear stained face
i cant see what i want to be
only what i am
i see the paleness and thinness
of my body...my bulimic, anorexic body
i see the scars on my stomach, wrists and legs
and the newest stream of blood
i feel the pain of heartache from a lost love
i feel hopeless and worthless and weak
my body begins to wabble and become limp
i fall to the floor from
hunger, blood loss and heart break
its almost over... im almost gone
and no ones left here to help me go on
the light is dimming
my breathing shallow
then i whisper with my one last breathe
i love you more...then life itself
P.S. i hope your better when im gone
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Re: i hope ur happy
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by Karlee14 on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:17:52 AM AEST
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Okay, sweetie I really hope this was just feelings not truthfully what's happening. It is a very well written poem but anorexia is not joke. If you ever feel like letting go don't because there will always be someone there to love you, and believe me it took myself awhile to figure it out. So if it helps, if you think your going through something bad remember that I've gone through it worse. Your not the only one who feels like this so plz don't commit suicide.
Huggs hope you feel better.
Love always,
Karlee
P.S. we're here for u if u need to talk. |
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