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Angels Beneath Me
Contributed by
harlot20
on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:51:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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And everything blurs to me till i see the forest of your discontentment,
I hold you close raising up the dark leaves that bind you and burn them into white ashes as we change.
Just listen you'll hear me in the breeeze,
You know who it is.
for i know,
Everytime.
I lose myself in you,
I like feeling you holding my hand.
Take me into the arms that i feel so warm and safe in and never let me fall,
But burn and i see that not everyone is smiling.
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harlot20
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2005-06-22 00:51:38]
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Re: Angels Beneath Me
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 01:18:23 AM AEST
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I got all this except the last line
But burn and i see that not everyone is smiling.
Did u make an error in words or am I jus not getting it?
U r a really good writer.
huggs,
emy
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