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i think its done
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 02:03:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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in a room full of darkness for the last 30 years
my candle so bright it brought me to tears
burning alone in this world full of dreams
wanting to see hope i started to scream
then you came along like a moth to my flame
you taught me to love and forget all the blame
you hugged me and lied oh what a play on my soal
i hope it wasnt truely one of your goals
well you played the part well i fell in your trap
after i sold you my soal and drew you a map
but once again whos laughing now
deffently not me im wearing a scowl
so back in this room one candle to bright
i hope i find love before i run out of light
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Re: i think its done
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by Katie2008 on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:26:34 PM AEST
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I really like how you wrote this.
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