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Fire From the Sky
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 04:09:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I Fall as fire, from the sky.
Keep my lips up,
Hold my tongue,
Glimpse of hatred,
Eclipse the sun.
As they worship me,
What is it I love?
Yes I try now, to ignore.
Stare at another part of my eyes,
and my heart
I'm a joke, now I'm dead.
I'm so livid,
as the epitome dies
Bleed on me,
This life a shell
and so its living hell
On my second chance,
Its time to take a stance now
Repetitions hold is a fire side
Does the competition take the part
Open my eyes,
For what i got Sever the ties,
Erase my life
Take a look at me,
and put my heart upon the shelf,
It still bleeds, these wounds wont heal,
This pain inside is all thats real
Fall, As fire.
Fall as fire from
From the skies above
Life adornes no longer living without your love!
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MajesticPoet
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2005-06-22 16:09:18]
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Re: Fire From the Sky
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 04:18:30 PM AEST
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| lots of imagery (fire etc) helped paint the picture. |
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Re: Fire From the Sky
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 11:03:11 PM AEST
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Once a full self.... somewhere along the way all
....shelled out...
Hopefully it was only a brief and short fall..
Looks like hope here..
*****Take a look at me,
and put my heart upon the shelf,
It still bleeds, these wounds wont heal,
This pain inside is all thats real
The blood and pain shows some life left, even though painful..
The write is super.. It sure is powerful
Well we truly are shaped from the outside world.
Your write has a sense of self sacrifice
The Final observation posted at the close is the saddest part..
**********Life adornes no longer living without your love!
Wonderful job.. Keep up the excellent writing.. its deep..
RLPoetess ; ))
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