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Flow or Go
Contributed by
justme03
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 07:54:08 PM in AEST
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I got no one to turn to and I feel alone.
Im having trouble putting away a habit of old.
I want to pull out my old friend again tonight
and cut all my problems away.
I really want to just end it all tonight.
Not just the cuts to take away the pain in my heart.
I dont want temporary relief.
Tonight I want the real deal, Im ready.
I cant take it anymore. All this stored up anger.
I cant get it out.
Im striving to just yell it out loud.
I wish youd just take me away.
Can I write it out? Let the anger turn to ink?
Or should I grab my dagger and let it go?
I just dont know.
Im having trouble thinking.
My two personalities are battling inside my head.
I wish I were dead. But then again, I want to live.
Should I turn to my pen and let it flow?
Or turn to the knife and let it go?
~Kortnie~
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Re: Flow or Go
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by JustAGirl001 on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 08:49:17 PM AEST
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| Very nice poem. I loved it. Please don't do it tho. :'( |
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Re: Flow or Go
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:35:55 AM AEST
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| Oh my god.... WOW WOW WOW..... the emotion & the pain..... truly an amazing poem.. straight from the soul... if I could I would give this an 11!! I truly loved it! |
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