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Stripped
Contributed by
acidicblasphemy
on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 08:52:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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She walks around this world
with a painted smile.
Her new clothes from Abercrombie
are the latest style.
Shed always pretend
that this is real.
Shes never had the courage
to break true the seal.
To be herself
seemed so unreal to her.
Its always been a lie,
just another massive blur.
She doesnt want
to live a lie any longer.
She decides to try
and suppress her hunger.
She climbs onto the stool,
dressed in her true attire.
She slips into the truth,
stripped and with a smile.
Copyright ©
acidicblasphemy
... [
2005-06-22 20:52:06]
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Re: Stripped
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:13:25 PM AEST
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| very interesting and it plays out well. you did a good job. good write. |
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Re: Stripped
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by desire on
Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 06:45:41 PM AEST
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Great job, I liked that she was finally ready to show her true selfi loved it
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Re: Stripped
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by desire on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2018 @ 04:25:21 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this peace and all the truth it holds..loved it😎 |
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