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Thinking
Contributed by
brew
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:20:48 PM in AEST
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Anite that simmers and yet goes no where
To meet and greet, and in hopes to see
A simple hello, but yet not answered
To ponder and wonder if it is there
To seek and want to see if there
To come out from beyond, and also no where
Is it what , should seem to appeal
To make the one so real
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brew
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2005-06-22 22:20:48]
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Re: Thinking
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:41:42 PM AEST
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brew, it is short yet sweet, but more on the sweet side.
it reminds of the anticipation of a potential relationship...remember, anything can happen...
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Re: Thinking
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:27:36 PM AEST
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like french cooking.. this write is..
simple and magnificent.
and I have to agree with wiz..anything can happen-
great work..
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Re: Thinking
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by bernard on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:18:15 AM AEST
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| Short yet sweet is an apt title for the poem. I like it from bernard. |
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