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I hope your happy now
Contributed by
firearchdruid
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:50:02 PM in AEST
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Like the oceans tide the pain comes and goes
Like a river the memory flows
I cant stand seeing you with that other guy
Have you ever felt like you wanted to die
I bought you a nice engagement ring
Little did I know that I was only a fling
I loved you more then words could say
And I still will each and every day
I truely hope you are happier now
As much as my broken heart can allow
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Re: I hope your happy now
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:24:02 AM AEST
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Ouch! Oh wow, this is sad...Nevertheless; I enjoyed the effortless rhyming, and the smooth flow...Your emotions really showed in the words, and I could feel your pain...Take Care.
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Re: I hope your happy now
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by Sinned on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 06:04:55 PM AEST
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| a sad but flowing pome I can picture myself in your spot as I to have been hurt by a love only I lost my family 4 children because of a divorce. Please write more you have the talent. |
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