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Cause of Death--Her Mirror
Contributed by
acidicblasphemy
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:07:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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They say her life must rearrange.
They tell her that she has to change.
She used to have fun in this world.
Now everyones just screaming at her;
Be PERFECT, be right!
Your teeth MUST be spotless white!
Live up to OUR expectations!
We dont WANT your explanations!
Dont DENY us!
BE like us!
Were here to make YOU happy,
so stop BEING so damn SAPPY!
CHANGE your clothes!
Dress like THESE hoes!
BRUSH your hair!
Put makeup THERE!
DATE this boy,
dont PLAY with toys!
You HAVE to exercise,
and HAVE great thighs!
PUT this on and PAINT your lips!
Now DANCE around and SHAKE your hips!
She doesnt want to be this way,
she cant survive here if she stays.
She discovers a totally different means,
packs herself up and decides to leave.
Whats THIS, why arent you DONE?!
I KNEW I shouldnt have LEFT you alone!
Your SKINS still crappy!
Your nails are NAPPY!
Your CLOTHES arent pressed!
Your HAIRS a mess!
Whats THIS red liquid on your BED?!
Why the HELL are you dead?!
After all weve DONE for you!
You could have, at least, SHINED your shoes!
You STAINED your sheets!
I cant believe you DID this feat!
Do you know how MUCH this will cost!
ALL my money, its a MAJOR loss!
Now, get EVERYTHING arranged!
You MUST find someone to HELP you change!
And DO hurry, I have no more time,
to waste with such a STUPID crime!
I dont know if you fully understand,
so let me put you two hand in hand.
Lets see if I can make this clearer.
The cause of death, was her mirror.
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2005-06-23 02:07:53]
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Re: Cause of Death--Her Mirror
(User Rating: 1 )
by Arannon on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 09:59:20 AM AEST
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I liked this poem very much, up until the last stanza. The lines flowed very smoothly, and the shouted emphasis fit. I didn't understand the last line very much, though.
But overall, very good. |
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Re: Cause of Death--Her Mirror
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:13:12 AM AEST
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| nice poem, how you capitalized things really made it speak more..if that made sense? ah, well it was a wonderful poem and i enjoyed reading it. |
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