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im the ghost
Contributed by
blackholesun
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 05:31:56 AM in AEST
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you were here,and i was like air,
i said i loved you four times but no reply,
and i do cry,like the wind,
soft and barely heard,
im screaming but to you i wisper evry word.
can you feel me now,
im holding you with my eyes,
trembling inside i feel the cries.
all of your words just lies,
you hurt me the most,
you turned me away and i feel like a ghost
no words of love ever spoken,u keep my heart open and broken,
i pray u feel my sorrow,but in hope of a better tomorrow,
i must let you go,
you have no time to boast,
im dead remember,to you im the ghost
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Re: im the ghost
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:08:22 AM AEST
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This is heartwrenching...just picturing this going down. *ouch*
You have some great lines here hon...nice piece!
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Re: im the ghost
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by jmpy84 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:24:01 PM AEST
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| you can feel the emotion well done |
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