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Depression
Contributed by
harlot20
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 05:21:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Early morning
Still awake
I ache
Every purpose
To live
This way
Strange voices
Dont care
I whisper
My man
Needs me
To feel
Love him
Cherish him
I do
I'm
Solitude
I'm
Depression
I'm dead
RUN
AWAY
FASTER NOW
DON'T
DIE
JUST LIVE
FOR ME
KISS ME
LOVE ME
I live
For this
This rush
Go now
Live life
Don't think
Doesn't matter
This time
She'll win
Copyright ©
harlot20
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2005-06-23 17:21:55]
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Re: Depression
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 02:00:49 PM AEST
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i like the way you're simplified this by shortening it... and i also like the way it flows, but it's a very sad piece, greatyly expressed, but very sad.
good job on here all the same. |
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