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One Way Flight
Contributed by
Bec
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 08:03:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Ive never been one to easily trust,
But when it comes down to you, I cant help it,
Far from perfect, I know this isnt lust,
Dont have a chance, i'll do what i see fit.
You and I will never be, maybe one day,
You will see, that I loved you will all my heart,
Hopeless as this is, i've just got to say,
Youve changed me, and its really such an art.
I will never know, how you ever feel,
But the feeling you give, is just too good,
This is just something else for me to deal,
With, if i could make things faster, i would.
Ive given my heart to you, without you knowing,
It doesn't stop my mind from overflowing.
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Bec
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2005-06-23 20:03:23]
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Re: One Way Flight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 03:41:21 PM AEST
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i am like you in the fact that i don't readily trust people...and i love this poem...honest
great write!
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Re: One Way Flight
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by Lin54 on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 10:15:22 PM AEST
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Isn't life like that--you have a hard time trusting anyone maybe because of past hurts or just naturally just taking it slow--then someone comes along and changes all that. I like your writing--keep it up!
Lin54 |
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Re: One Way Flight
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by Devils-confused-daugther on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 07:00:49 AM AEST
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hey, i trust people quickly well if i feel their a friend and not a foe, but this is nice, its lik how i feel now deres a guy at skool and hes cute and we both look at each other and we talk a bit but i kno we'll neva date or anything lik that *sigh* but i can look, lol
GR8 poem!!l8ters DCD |
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