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Die in Your Arms
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 08:52:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I choose to be beside you
In your strong arms
As I say my last word
That of your name
While my last breath is heard
Let me feel your warmth
As my own does start to fade
The last time we are together,
How I do love you
Even in death I will forever.
Dear love, nows my time
Dont leave me for I am so cold
And I beg of you not to cry,
Youll soon be with me
So hold me as I die.
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2005-06-23 20:52:47]
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Re: Die in Your Arms
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:59:37 PM AEST
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You are a fantastic poet, I hope u r going to do something with your work, because you can I read ur other poem the voices one you really have talent.
I am going to be starting college soon a freinds brother in law who is a professor read my stuff and gave me the courage to be proud of my work and go to college ion support of it.
Your work is soo good I just have to pass on the same, do something with it its great!!!!!!! |
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