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Twelve Little Cuts
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 08:58:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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One thing tells my story
Not the look upon my face
Nor the poetry I pen
These things elude no grace
They are eternal
A dark sight only I have seen
For they cause me much shame
Of despaired places I have been
For my twelve little cuts
That are mine, and mine alone
Are still bloody and gruesome
From unhappiness that has grown
Appearing raw and uninviting
But so warm, and familiar to me
Such temporary pleasure
That deceive my mind with glee
My decoy for heartache
My evil that seems constructive
An unclean sin that is my own
I know this is self- destructive
These twelve little cuts
Are symbols of my pain
That forever rest upon my thigh
Small scars that will remain
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-06-23 20:58:38]
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Re: Twelve Little Cuts
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by jilted on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 09:10:14 PM AEST
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Your poem was written very well
I only wish I had only twelve
I was stupid and carved up both my arms
The last time i did it was a year and half
But even though I feel Im somewhat cured
I cannot always hide my scars and people think Im weird
They will never understand that at the time a lot of help comes out of self inflicting that little bit of pain. i do wish now though that id dealt with my pain another way, Because my angry scars are here to stay. Know that you'r not alone and if you must continue to cut, keep it in those hidden places. |
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Re: Twelve Little Cuts
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 07:05:45 AM AEST
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| this is incredible, i wish i had only 12 |
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Re: Twelve Little Cuts
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by Sad-one on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 11:14:01 PM AEST
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this was great.
i wish i only had 12 cuts
i wish i only had double 12 cuts
NE wayz this was excellent you have great talent. It was kinda triggering for me but it was good. |
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Re: Twelve Little Cuts
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by RavenEnsued on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 03:13:36 PM AEST
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| Very strong poem. Amazing that you can write about something so personal. I've only been a cutter for 2 months but i know that the scars will last forever. Great Write. Keep It Up |
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Re: Twelve Little Cuts
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by aegurly on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 12:51:52 AM AEST
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| it was a great poem im only 13 and have more than twelve |
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