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music to guide me
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:04:19 PM in AEST
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pushed in mud
flailed out of your way
abandoned on road side
scared and afraid
scared out of hell
and out of my mind
you shot me down
and thats not ok
first comes the tears
the rain of my sorrow,
hurt is not shallow
and the cut is so deep
now i turn up my sad face and fight
you will not hurt me again tonite
something to jazz me
some old rock and rool
brings up my fire
and keeps my going goin goin
i will beat u down
and burn out ur light
i will never surrender
to your faceful fear
with my music to guide me
your history here
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spazz911
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2005-06-23 22:04:19]
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Re: music to guide me
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by foxfire44 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:08:56 PM AEST
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| very deep poem strong emotion...keep it up |
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Re: music to guide me
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by emystar on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 10:30:18 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of determination.
good worrk and stay strong.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: music to guide me
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:52:22 AM AEST
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| Nice emotion |
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Re: music to guide me
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:21:14 AM AEST
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Nice... I hope you do keep the energy to fight. : ) Good write...
Jodi |
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