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Rhyme!!
Contributed by
sweety_pie
on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 05:06:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Rhyme
I feel like writing a rhyme
that really goes in time
a rhyme that sounds great
and never ending like a date
if such a rhyme was true
would it rhyme for me or you
would it sound fantastic
or artifical and plastic
don't tell me what a rhyme can be
i am smart enough to see
does fat rhyme with cat
or does matt rhyme with cat
could you have a fat cat who sat on a matt
or a frog on a log who though he was a dog
must a rhyme be funny and jolly?
or should it be about a girl called polly
rhyming is fun for everyone
so when your bored or feeling alone
write a rhyme that goes in time !
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sweety_pie
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Re: Rhyme!!
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 05:35:06 AM AEST
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A masterpeice of rhymn.
awesome.
Luv it and oh so true.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Rhyme!!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 06:08:37 AM AEST
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A genius of pace. Yet another little read poem that offers a lot for the reader. Great Job!
-SCM |
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Re: Rhyme!!
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by Strawberry on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 07:14:39 PM AEST
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| this is proably one of the best poems that i have read on here. its one that if i was in tears then i would start to laugh or smile. u really have a way with rhyme. Keep it up! Sammi Jo |
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