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Imagination
Contributed by
justme03
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:30:21 AM in AEST
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I dared to dream
I dared to fight
I dared to be the one
that had separate sight
I saw things you didnt
I see things you cant
Im the filler in the spaces
you lack
Im the part of you that
wants to fly
Im the part of you that
is your minds eye
I am your imagination
set me free
I can help you to see the
world differently
Anything your heart desires
I can inspire
Just close your eyes
Hold on tight
It is time to take flight
~Kortnie~
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justme03
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2005-06-24 10:30:21]
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Re: Imagination
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by Sad-one on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:21:53 PM AEST
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I`ve read some of your work before, this write seems a little different than what i`ve read from you before , but it`s really good. Everyone here should be able to relate, because we show our imagination in our writing.
KEEP WRITING!
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Re: Imagination
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by Buggsy on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 04:15:32 AM AEST
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| I like it Kortnie, I like it :-) |
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Re: Imagination
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by ilovelillbj on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 11:44:04 AM AEST
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the ideas here are great and i think with a little revision the poem good be too. good write, but be consistant :)
x sarah x |
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