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fated my blood
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 04:39:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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faded'
jaded'
hated'
fated'
to be here
to be unsure
to be unclear
cant find the cure
unknown
unshown
unflown
yet flying
unheard
obsurd
not learned
yet knowing
wisely challenged
caged in batlle
can you hear the cheers
of blood dripping cups
i cant see past the color
of red in their mouth
so putrid a smell
they love it none the less
i know what they are
but speak it not
they will take my blood
but its all ive got
faded red
jaded in a cage
hated i am
fated my blood
they take it and i am now one of them
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hardrocker15198916
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2005-06-24 16:39:00]
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Re: fated my blood
(User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 11:23:49 AM AEST
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I liked this poem a lot. I am not one for people just listing words down though. Try and get creative with them. This was a great poem though. Keep it up...
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