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Suicide
Contributed by
chantel
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Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I wake up to lonliness,
you wonder where did i go.
I walk through the house of sadness,
you really need to know.
I breath the air of forgetfullness,
you see a tear run from my eye.
I drink the water of depretion,
you don't ask but wonder, why?
I eat off the tree of sorrow,
you turn and walk away.
I walk through the door of goodbye,
you turn back and stay.
I look up frm my resting ground,
you sit and cry.
I found a reson to run,
you know hurt becouse i wanted to die.
I now know what i did to you.
Your life goes on all alone.
I put my head down never to look up.
You relize i will never come home.
Copyright ©
chantel
... [
2003-01-07 17:00:00]
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Re: Suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by DOB_Osirus on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 10:47:20 PM AEST
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| A powerful right...I love the idea of a "journey" taking place for this character. The "comments" part of this poem caught my eye. "I wrote this the day I die"....very Radioheadesque. I suggest trying some happy things, too, for it is always interesting to see someone in this state write something beautiful. Good luck, and keep spewing those poems |
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Re: Suicide
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by chantel on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 11:53:33 PM AEST
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actully let me fill you in i apreciate the comment
i ovrdosed on 150 loratabs and i died, well they called it a "literal death" i went to hell and saw what it looked like god let me by on this one but i serve him for the rest of my life like i should have been doing that is why i put" when i killed myself "
but thank you so much |
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