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A Child's Rag Doll
Contributed by
kiss4roq
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:40:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My heart is a child's rag doll,
Taking one last stand, changing into a dramatic fall
Torn to pieces and thrown to the ground,
Out in the darkness, nowhere to be found
Glass eyes staring at uncaring hands,
Kind heart, with no demands
Bright patchwork dress trampled and stained,
In the mud right after it rained
Stuffing-substance leaking to the breeze,
Not able to be please
Smiling broken at the shining blue sky,
Just like a doll waiting to die
(the one and only, Kristena)
Copyright ©
kiss4roq
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2005-06-24 23:40:01]
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Re: A Child's Rag Doll
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by ABySs on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 01:44:13 AM AEST
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i liked that got great imagery
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Re: A Child's Rag Doll
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by Ramfire on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 01:10:40 PM AEST
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Comparing your heart to a discarded ragdoll is outstanding. Wish I could write something like that.
Ramfire |
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