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Lost
Contributed by
blueheart
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Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 01:35:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The scent of Death,
Emanates through time,
Gripping wayward souls into its gulf.
They each fall,
One by one into ashes of the carnage,
Trailing towards evolving transmigration.
Slowly, wholly,
Their cries whisked away,
Into depths of eternal misery.
Ensnared in spills of madness,
Their souls crumble like shattered glass,
And they lose themselves to the reapers call.
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blueheart
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2005-06-25 01:35:47]
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Re: Lost
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by ABySs on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 01:59:53 AM AEST
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its got a nice idea behind it but i dont realy like the poem
but thats just me plz dont take any offence |
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Re: Lost
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by venkat on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 12:15:22 AM AEST
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| awesome....well done....venkat |
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Re: Lost
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by ButchHoward on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 02:47:55 PM AEST
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Death is not pretty. Sometimes poetry conveys far more that sweet and lovely thoughts. This is such a poem. It is powerful and dark. The well written lines made me shudder to read them. Good write!
Butch |
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Re: Lost
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 03:51:04 AM AEST
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darkly deeply beautiful, you are such a fabulous writer:)
love n' hugs nessa
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