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SINGLED OUT
Contributed by
chantel
on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the new girl in class
the fat one in the hall
the one that can't pass
the boy that can't afford clothes at the mall
one day you will look around
and wonder "where did they go"
funny how all the teasing you did
and they didn't make a sound
it's ok for being cruel of course you didn't know
a teacher walks in your class
runing down her face is a tear
last night your classmate commited suicied
what does it matter all you cared about was tonight and beer
after all it wasn't you that died
the day before yo looked at her and said a thing or two.
she looked down an crying walked away
know she is dead and you wonder "what did i do"
if i didn't say that would she be here today?
the new girl in school
the fat one in the hall
who cares if shes not cool
tonight give her a call
10-16-01
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chantel
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2003-01-07 17:20:00]
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Re: SINGLED OUT
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by Patterz on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:46:02 PM AEST
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This is a really incredible poem, the alternate view is displays is definately something we should all think about. I hope that this poem is based on your observations of the world isntead of on yourself, but if it is, understand that ur peers are just scared, they dont' know who they are so they have to try and feel above other people...f*** them, you know that you are an incredible person and dont let n e one ever tell you different. Incredible write, a five star for sure
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Re: SINGLED OUT
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by Patterz on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:46:50 PM AEST
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This is a really incredible poem, the alternate view is displays is definately something we should all think about. I hope that this poem is based on your observations of the world isntead of on yourself, but if it is, understand that ur peers are just scared, they dont' know who they are so they have to try and feel above other people...f*** them, you know that you are an incredible person and dont let n e one ever tell you different. Incredible write, a five star for sure...keep writing and share ur gift with the world
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Re: SINGLED OUT
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 02:11:17 AM AEST
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Aman very strong this will make you think about what to say before you say it. I'm glad you bought this to everyones attention.
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