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Life and Death
Contributed by
Shorty_88
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Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 06:29:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Death is to dream a dream so sweet that puts the soal to peace.
When the human body is no more,
And all thats left is momories of yesterdays before.
Your soal marked by the life of those who you love and love you in return.
Every kindness shown by man and every single sting and burn
will be forgotten?
When the heart of man will be judged before ppearance!
When the love of man will overtake hate!
And when the wars that rage across this world will seize.
In doing so will give all race a chance to be free.
When dream is more important than awake
And when the hand of man is touched by god and rests among the stars and heavens
In when my soal will feel no more pain for this world.
And will be set free!
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2005-06-25 18:29:32]
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Re: Life and Death
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 03:48:08 PM AEST
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| This poem is very descriptive and has some very good content.It would help to read through and correct any spelling mistakes, i.e.Soul.Good luck with your writing, Ros |
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Re: Life and Death
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by MissUnderstood on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 01:17:35 AM AEST
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| I like the rhyme between the second and third lines! Its so true too. And you are absoloutely right, you have to die to live! |
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