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Letting Go
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 08:54:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Im letting go
But you already know
That, which is why
You sit there and watch me die
You never cried
Only told lies
Im sick of it
Im ending this
Im beginning to slip
I aint going to just trip
Im falling down
All the way to the ground
1,000 or more feet
I watch as you all begin to flee
You dont want to see the blood
Dont want to be near the flood
That will appear
You dont want to be near
Hurry away from me
Youve all become enemies
I guess now we know
Why I let go
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2005-06-25 20:54:46]
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Re: Letting Go
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sad-one on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:05:04 AM AEST
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| In all its a great poem, i think in some parts,you tried too hard to make it rhyme. In some parts there was no rhyming so the rhyme scheme was kinda messed up. This was still a good poem |
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