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Just my Shadow and Me
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 09:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Walking alone
Im on my own
The only thing I see
Is the shadow of me
I look all around
But the only one is on the ground
Just my shadow
Is all I know
There is not another soul
I feel like others have been sold
To other people and lives
Im alone in my own strife
Just my shadow and me
Thats all that there be
You can watch us
Walking in broken trust
Walking all alone
We are on our own
My shadow is at my side,
Only one who didnt divide
Away from me
Only one that didnt leave
My shadow is my only friend
So, when the sun goes to bed
I am all alone
And all on my own
Its just my shadow and me
I do believe
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Re: Just my Shadow and Me
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 10:28:31 AM AEST
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sad poem. i feel the same way most of the day, week, month, year. you can be surrounded by people and laughter and even laugh yourself and still feel completly alone.
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Re: Just my Shadow and Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 02:55:25 PM AEST
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Nicely expressed sprints...Something we can all relate to some times. Hang in there. Things will work themselves out...
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Re: Just my Shadow and Me
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by Adrea on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 11:24:03 AM AEST
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| thats such a sad poem....but rly good. is that how u rly feel :S |
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Re: Just my Shadow and Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 04:38:53 PM AEST
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truly amazing...i love it. reminds me of "boulevard of broken dreams" by greenday.
wonderful write
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