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Mistaken Blaming
Contributed by
dreamer_4_eternity
on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 10:47:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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How could God let this happen?
I often hear you ask
Well, its not Gods fault
For mankind did the task
To all the non-believers
You may stop reading if you please
For I am about to explain
Why pain and sorrow has to be
God respects all of us
That we may live once of two ways
The way he intends for us to live
Or were allowed to create our own way
He didnt want you to be a murderer
Yet he knows if you will
He didnt want you to commit wicked sins
Or to beat, rape, or kill
If you are blaming God
It must be because of fear
Youre afraid to face your own faults
Ashamed of shedding tears
Many believe Gods mean
His intention for us to go to hell
But God understands were sinners!
And he intends for us to do well
So there you have it
God gives us respect
Its mankinds fault
If their lives are wrecks
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Re: Mistaken Blaming
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by UnmovedMover on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:26:34 PM AEST
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Good write, I think you might want to develop the whole pre-destination philosophy a little more, although you did adress it with the line:
"He didn�t want you to be a murderer
Yet he knows if you will"
Still a great write. |
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Re: Mistaken Blaming
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by dreamer_4_eternity on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 01:03:42 PM AEST
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| Hey you may see ?'s all over the place! It's not me who put them there, it seems yourpoetry turned every little puncuation thing almost like quotations and stuff into question marks, that's a little irritating, but I just needed to tell you they weren't put there purposely |
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Re: Mistaken Blaming
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by scottmunster on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 03:23:28 AM AEST
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Good job, I enjoyed it very much and totally agree with you. Keep up the good work
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