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Hate and Her
Contributed by
Robdob_2004
on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 09:26:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Do i hate you?
is a question you pose
such a strong query which
i prefer to discolse
What we had was special
and it could have been more
it felt like i was ill
and you were my cure
But you took that feeling
and threw it away
replaced it with a new need
which i try not to say
I remember it clearly
you were in OUR bed
from which my pillow had
grew a strangers head
The months have gone by
and i missed you so much
i missed your subtle laugh
and missed your gentle touch
I clung oto these thoughts
it made me so confused
my head felt so tormented
i felt beaten and abused
But now i feel so clear
and know who you are
your a girl who i knew
your a door i left ajar
You will nexer be happy
until you tell people the truth
and dont so you always have
because i am the proof
So onwards i must go
my future is unclear
the only thing im sure off is
your not involved my dear
Do i hate you?
the answer im ready to show
how can i judge you?
your someone i dont know
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Robdob_2004
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2005-06-26 09:26:55]
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Re: Hate and Her
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by brew on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 11:18:00 AM AEST
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Well.glad to know you can move on. Hate.a strong, and hard word. Its almost like stating the word love.
Liked the way you, said your peace, yet was subtle.
Good post.
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Re: Hate and Her
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by Dandy on
Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 04:09:45 AM AEST
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| This is a good poem that for me, captures the pain of betrayal, pain and loss. |
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