|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
the corner
Contributed by
nightrider
on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
cut my arm into pieces,
now watch the red flow,
its a comforting sight,
the blood on my arm is beautiful tonight,
no one can comprehend my reasons,
no one wants to try,
im so confused about everything,
it only spreads to them,
called a freak,
and shoved away,
i sit in the corner,
waiting for another day,
i cant understand these people,
i just need to escape,
but where to run?
where to hide?
somewhere where no one can find me,
that place doesnt exist,
it hasnt yet been built,
so, the corner is my home,
forever i will sit here,
alone, apart,
shunted away and deeply hurt
Copyright ©
nightrider
... [
2003-01-07 18:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: the corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 06:56:34 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Aww so sad but a great poem. |
|
|
Re: the corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 09:08:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| that was very sad, lift your spirit up, we need you here thats why God made you, |
|
|
Re: the corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by sheigha on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 09:09:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I love this poem...it's exactly how i feel right now...i just don't like to write about it too much but it's cool to see other people who you can relate to...thnx for sharing |
|
|
Re: the corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 12:37:09 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I liked this a lot especially the last line 'shunted away and deeply hurt' shunted you have to love something with the word shunted! Lol this was really truly great and the fact that u just made it up on the spot is amazing as well. I feel a lot like the emotions u expressed in the poem. Hope u hang in there.
Bobo (Joel) |
|
|
Re: the corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by Delusions on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 04:33:34 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Awsome Poem Nightrider... i enjoyed reading it alot, i especially liked the lines
"no one can comprehend my reasons,
no one wants to try" I feel like this many a day! Keep it up!
~delusions~
|
|
|
Re: the corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 09:09:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Aah the trusted dark corner that never tells our secrets..dark place to be in...and very beautifully written ...thanks for sharing this one..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
|
|
Re: the corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by chantel on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 01:44:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this was very good i fell like that many a day i know you will pull out of it and i will pray for you keep up the good writes
chantel |
|
|
Re: the corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 09:31:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| oooh dude i really liked the begging to lines. that was a good start! the whole thing was good! your not alone my friend! you are not alone one bit! be strong! we shall get through the other side! OF THE SILVER LINING! BE STRONG! |
|
|
Re: the corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by bopeep on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 11:53:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this is just how i feel each and everyday. finally someone else that understands this feeling. me liked poem alot! later...peace |
|
|
Re: the corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 04:22:15 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
HI NIGHTRIDER,
ANYONE WHO CAN DO THAT TO THEMSELF SHOULD KNOW SOMETHINK IS WRONG,
PLEASE SEEK HELP..KEEP THE FAITH,HELP IS ON ITS WAY.GOOD WRITE. |
|
|
Re: the corner
(User Rating: 1 )
by vydana on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 04:42:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| It's a great poem...sadly, I feel like that many days as well. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
