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Love cannot erase
Contributed by
Shorty_88
on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:47:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I Loved you here
I love you know
I'll love you when
My body dies down
When it starts getting hard to breath
When my heart starts to stop beating
When very weakly you'll hear me say
"We will be together up here someday"
When teary eyed i'll say goodbye
My thankyou's with a hurtfull sigh
When calmly death drifts in the room
No-one talks or even moves
And from above i will watch you
When you feel sad, i do to
But from the gates, i shall wait
Until you meet me at this place
I want you to remember me
Only of good momories
Because eventhough i left this place
My love for you will never erase
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2005-06-27 01:47:19]
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Re: Love cannot erase
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:07:14 AM AEST
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| really beautiful and haunting, especially the line :When calmly death drifts in the room |
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