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The Tigers Tail Twitches
Contributed by
secretwind
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Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 10:36:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In this burning confusion
the flames of desire
smoke and provoke me
to tell the tale of a tiger
a tiger
in the forest
tail twisting in the wind
sniffing the air
In search of something.
I seen wizards I seen dragons
flying through the air
I felt the essence of demons
on other creatures
who I watch with care,
I sweat blood and tears
sometimes I shake In fear
I hear words being spoken
but thier meaning is always unclear.
Concentrating on a flow
A bittersweet InnerVision
that's building to a crescendo
quietly waiting to explode,
I'm a rider a tiger
the last of my breed
exsisting In Illusions
never really knowing what's happening.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2005-06-27 10:36:22]
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Re: The Tigers Tail Twitches
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 12:11:24 PM AEST
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Nicely done! I really like the concept, and the visuals. The second stanza was my fave.
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Re: The Tigers Tail Twitches
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by Winterland on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 12:45:31 PM AEST
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I agree with Scorp. Good poem, but the second stanze really stands out. Nice work.
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